Tuesday, May 10, 2011
Blog Entry 17
The content of the food unit connects to previous texts ("The Allegory of the Cave," The Truman Show, The Matrix, "Red Pill or Blue Pill?") and to the main theme of this class, as expressed in the title of our class blog Living in the Matrix by making life choices and being able to explore new things and look out into the reality if the world and not having to always be stuck in one place and not understand why somethings happens. being able push yourself into doing what you have to do, to better yourself. for example, food is just like making decisions. you have to make a decision to want to try new thing with food and just being able to succeed in not making a bad choice. another example, is how food such as fast-food can make people fall behind and not be able to be healthy and just have you sitting in gaining weight. i believe that i have been doing well in this course and also have been improving on my writing skills. i believe that i still have a little more work to do and also try to better myself by doing extra exercise to increase my thoughts and ideas for claim/thesis. my last response to my CAT was pretty good. all i have to stay focus on is just making my thesis/claim clear and being able to keep all my ideas and examples flowing in the right path of my essay. this is going to help me to get a good grade on my test essay and also better on the CAT.
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