Blog Entry 14

i think the makers of The Meatrix films use The Matrix as the basis for their argument because the matrix is a film that people only do see what they are shown but not what the reality of it is. the meatrix is just a regular place like use but once neo made the choice to take the red pill and see the reality of life, he see that it is not as pretty as he was shown to him.the connection that these two films have in common is that they both show us what is like on the reality side of life and not what is just being shown and displayed in our face or in our lifestyle.

Blog Entry 13

  The movie The matrix is about a future and reality that is shown to human beings. Neo has a choice to take a red pill or a blue pill. The red pill moves you forward into the future of reality. The blue pill keeps you in current existence. Neo made the decision to take the red pill and become a hero to save the world from negative people, who tries to destroy it. If i had to make the same choice as Neo, i would take the red pill because u would want to discover what reality is and accomplish more things in life.


  Choices and decision that need to be made can help you move forward in reality. For example, choices based on school that can help you to succeed and move up. Another example is making good life decision to help you to be a better person. Also being able to move ahead in life and finally discover what reality really is.


  The red pill can also help me to accomplish my goals by digging deeper and working harder. For example, working harder for what you desire and believe in. stay focus in school and at work in order to be able to make it to a higher position. Last, giving your all at what you do best in order to move ahead to the next level in life.


  Being able to view life in a higher position and also understanding the value of reality is another good reason why i would take the red pill. its can help you to know how true and real life is. The things that will only happen in the future or happen in the following present,can help you to understand reality as well. Accomplishments and discovering  what reality is can help you understand life better.


   To conclude this essay, reality and life is filled with making choices and also being able to understand how far both of them can take you to be able to move ahead to the higher position and accomplish what you desire.

Blog Entry 12: Reflection and Evaluation

During this series of work i have display in this class, i believe that i have been doing well and understand the strategy was the work. i need to improve in organizing my essay and also making my ideas more clear. I also need to know how to him everything flowing so that reader can understand my claim and also my examples that support it. The only challenge I am facing in this class is just knowing how to making my claim more clear and also being able to make everything flow the way it is suppose to. What I need to know right now in order to move head and be able to succeed in my writing skill is just making my claim clear and make sure it makes sense. This class is helping to be able to just free write my thoughts and examples that can help my claim be clear and understandable. I also learn how to relate my life experience to claims so that it can be proven to be a good claim and a true claim. I enjoy learning new ways to write and improve my writing. Hopefully by the end of this class I will be able to writing great essay without having to struggle as to how I should organize everything. I can feel that I am improving in my writing by how I try to just think about what I am going to write before I write it. 

blog entry 11

"The Dangers of Reality TV" is an extract from timothy sexton, who believe that reality TV sends out unnecessary message that influences the minds of the youth of our society. Reality TV is a danger to the youth of our society because it decreases youth's ability to further their education and take want to take the fast way to get money.


competition is the key to success when it comes to reality TV. the image and the value it brings is all that matters. education is not a key to use when dealing with reality TV. reality TV is the fastest way to making  money. however, education is always the key to further your dream to be successful. it gives you the ability to move on to the next level and get to a higher position without your education, you wont be able to have the full- length knowledge to become successful at your career.


  one idea in the passage that i felt is significant is the key to being successful in the industry of reality TV show is image rather than your ability in your education. this is true. people who are in reality TV shows, are only being use for their image. they don't use their ability of education. they only care for what image they make that makes their values for money at the end of the day. you don't have to be the smartest person to be in a reality TV show. youths watch these shows and start to believe that they don't need an education to get rich or become famous. however, being able to be rich and famous is also about your ability to be educated and enforce what you know to your lifestyle.


  my experience with knowing that education is the key to being successful and reaching a higher position, is when i was in my senior year in high school i was in a program called W.I.A. this program help seniors get ready for college and start to build their careers. i had workshops that helped me  improve in school and i was also working for a paid internship at a hospital, as a volunteer. they helped e to get on the right track for college. it was a great experience because i was doing hands on work and also learning new things that can help me build my career to become  pediatrician RN nurse.


  to conclude this essay, education can get you further in life than just a couple of months on a reality TV show for free money. by continuing to further  your education , money will always be more and your ability to do anything you want to do will always be higher and help to make it to a higher position.

blog entry 10

CLAIM: i would take the red pill to move forward in reality and deal with new development.

REASONS: i choose the red pill because it moves me forward into the reality and shows me things that will help me  be ahead in life and also see reality better.

EVIDENCE: 1. making choices in  life to move forward help you understand reality better.
                     2. i decided to forward my education and go to college.
                     3. neo pick the red pill in order to become a better hero and save the world from the bad reality.

blog entry 9

My experience with THE MATRIX discussion telecommute was pretty interesting. In the beginning I was kind of confused, but I got the hang of it. The questions that was being discuss went well. Especially about which pill to take and what the outcome will be if you choose the red pill or blue pill. The only problem I had was when I posted a response to the question and it didn’t show on the discussion wall. But ill figure it out. I learn in this discussion that life is filled with different things to do and discover. It is our chose to make that decision to move forward or keep going backwards. By moving forward you can discover a lot of thing and experiences a lot of lesson that should be taught of known. Moving backwards will only push you back to what you knew and learned already.

Blog Entry 8

MY OPINION AND ANSWER TO TOPIC 5:

     Truman’s disobedience is good because everything around him even his family was fake. His whole life was made into a show and was controlled by a man named Cristoff. Cristoff felt that the place he made for Truman is where Truman should be. He felt no other people but the place he built for Truman was the best. When Truman found out that his life was being taped all his life, he started to disobey the laws and rules of his society and try to escape the fake world he has been living in. An individual like Truman have the moral obligation to break from rules and societal duties that he does not consider right or interfere with his desires because Truman is an adult who have certain choices to make that will only make him happy. Even if it means breaking the laws or rules of his society.

My experience with breaking the law was when I was a junior in high school and my best friend had gotten jump in Manhattan by a group of girls. I was so mad that we went back out there and I just blacked out. My loyalty to my friend means a lot to me. A man grabbed my best friend and the next thing I know I punched the man in the face, not knowing he was an under cop I was so embarrassed and I know that I have broken a big rule in the society of Manhattan. I had to deal with the consequences and also know that my desires to be loyalty to my friends or anybody that love and care for can cause a sever punishment and also cause your freedom because disobeying the law or rules of your society is like taking your freedom down a road of a lot of consequences. Being able to go after you desire can cause many problems but not if you think before acting.